Wednesday, 21 October 2015

Crafting Sentences

This week we have been crafting sentences. We were making our sentences clearer and make sure we're leaving in the important details.
This is my sentence:
A terrible earthquake just hit Christchurch and killed hundreds of people. 

I worked on this sentence and then chose my favourite new sentence:
A huge terrible earthquake killed hundreds of people in Christchurch.

By Tom

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