LOST
Hi my name
is Garry and I pick up rubbish. One day
I was picking up rubbish in the dark at the park. I saw something running at me,
it was a fox. It bit me! I ran back into my house and I got the phone. I called
the pet patrol. Twenty minutes later they had put the fox to sleep and put him
into a cage. They put him in the van. I’m never going to know what happened to
the fox. I hope he doesn’t die.
By Tamati 4/6/15
Dear Diary
The sound of yelling woke me up, it was coming from upstairs.
There was fighting. I tried to find the captain but I couldn’t find him. He was
asleep in his cabin. He said “go away!”. I said “but…”. “Quiet!” he shouted.
I went out of the captain’s cabin. I climbed the ropes to the
crow’s nest. Then I saw land! I dropped the anchor and it went BOOM!
It was peaceful in this new land. I made a house in an area
with lots of trees. I was happy in New Zealand.
By Max 27/3/15
Naughty
monkey and the banana
In a jungle
lived 20 noisy monkeys. One of them was a very naughty monkey. There was only 1
banana and 20 monkeys but then naughty monkey said “there’s lots more bananas
on the other side of the jungle!”
Naughty
monkey had lied so the other monkeys went to get the bananas. While the others
were away naughty monkey ate the banana. The other monkeys came back after 3
hours with no bananas.
“We think
you lied naughty monkey” they said, “we’re angry with you! We’re so angry!”. So
they made naughty monkey go and get 19 bananas.
Naughty
monkey felt sad because he had lied and he promised to never lie again.
The end
Moral: never
lie to your friends.
By Jack
My Matariki legend
Tawhirimatea was so angry that Tanemahuta had separated his
parents, Rangi the sky father and Papa the earth mother! He was so angry that
he generated a hurricane ball! He through it hard at the ground, and it bounced
so high it smashed into a big star, and shattered into seven pieces. The stars
find it so painful that they can only shine bright once a year. After that time
they retreat back deep into space. That is my story of Matariki.
15\06\15 By Harry L
Matariki
In the
beginning there was nothing except a twitch then Papa the earth mother and Rangi
the sky father appeared. They loved each other so much they didn’t let go of
each other. They had 7 children. Two of them were Tane the god of the forest
and Tawhirimatea god of wind and storms. All the gods wanted to split their
parents except Tawhirimatea. Tane didn’t listen to his brother and pushed his
mum and dad apart. Tawhirimatea was so angry that he ripped out one of his eyes
and threw it at Tane’s forehead. It shattered on impact into 7 pieces and flew
up to the sky only to shine once a year.
By Nathan
Wolf
He roams and strikes his prey with a
spear tip grin,
Harry. B
LOST
Hi my name
is Garry and I pick up rubbish. One day
I was picking up rubbish in the dark at the park. I saw something running at me,
it was a fox. It bit me! I ran back into my house and I got the phone. I called
the pet patrol. Twenty minutes later they had put the fox to sleep and put him
into a cage. They put him in the van. I’m never going to know what happened to
the fox. I hope he doesn’t die.
By Tamati 4/6/15
Dear Diary
The sound of yelling woke me up, it was coming from upstairs.
There was fighting. I tried to find the captain but I couldn’t find him. He was
asleep in his cabin. He said “go away!”. I said “but…”. “Quiet!” he shouted.
I went out of the captain’s cabin. I climbed the ropes to the
crow’s nest. Then I saw land! I dropped the anchor and it went BOOM!
It was peaceful in this new land. I made a house in an area
with lots of trees. I was happy in New Zealand.
By Max 27/3/15
Naughty
monkey and the banana
In a jungle
lived 20 noisy monkeys. One of them was a very naughty monkey. There was only 1
banana and 20 monkeys but then naughty monkey said “there’s lots more bananas
on the other side of the jungle!”
Naughty
monkey had lied so the other monkeys went to get the bananas. While the others
were away naughty monkey ate the banana. The other monkeys came back after 3
hours with no bananas.
“We think
you lied naughty monkey” they said, “we’re angry with you! We’re so angry!”. So
they made naughty monkey go and get 19 bananas.
Naughty
monkey felt sad because he had lied and he promised to never lie again.
The end
Moral: never
lie to your friends.
By Jack
My Matariki legend
Tawhirimatea was so angry that Tanemahuta had separated his
parents, Rangi the sky father and Papa the earth mother! He was so angry that
he generated a hurricane ball! He through it hard at the ground, and it bounced
so high it smashed into a big star, and shattered into seven pieces. The stars
find it so painful that they can only shine bright once a year. After that time
they retreat back deep into space. That is my story of Matariki.
15\06\15 By Harry L
Matariki
In the
beginning there was nothing except a twitch then Papa the earth mother and Rangi
the sky father appeared. They loved each other so much they didn’t let go of
each other. They had 7 children. Two of them were Tane the god of the forest
and Tawhirimatea god of wind and storms. All the gods wanted to split their
parents except Tawhirimatea. Tane didn’t listen to his brother and pushed his
mum and dad apart. Tawhirimatea was so angry that he ripped out one of his eyes
and threw it at Tane’s forehead. It shattered on impact into 7 pieces and flew
up to the sky only to shine once a year.
By Nathan Wolf
Saber tooth tiger
He lurks
around in the tall grass lands, growling a ferocious growl.
His long
fangs are as white as snow.
As soon as
he spots his dinner, another tiger spots the winners prize.
A fight
occurs faster than a cheetah
- scratching
and biting, banging and fighting.
Finally the
fight is over, the loser slinks away.
23.2.15 Tom 
Hi can we get more writing time. Alex
ReplyDeleteHi Alex,
ReplyDeleteGreat to see you contributing to the Blog, even when you are home from school due to ill-health!
There is nothing to stop you writing anywhere . . . anytime and you can share it via the Class Blog, for all to see. It means that you can go on contributing to our class and your own learning & development . . . no matter where you are. Awesome eh?
Hi Ms Whitaker,
ReplyDeleteI reckon you do an awesome job on the blog. I was wondering whether we, as a class, could go down to the library sometime?
Bye, Holly.