Tuesday 16 April 2013

Charged!

I am walking through the paddock to go frogging when our bull, All Black, stamps his foot, lowers his head and looks at me funny. As I run away from our bull I trip and get a giant face full of poo. I think that the Bull might have been laughing at me but I feel a mix of fear, anger & embarrassment.


Alex.S  16.4.13
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  1. Holly11 June 2013 at 16:00

    Hi Alex,
    Nice story. But that face full of poo must have smelt, and felt, pretty bad! I feel sorry for you. What did you do after the face full of poo?
    From Holly.

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  2. SWhitaker9 July 2013 at 20:01

    Hi Alex, I love your opening sentence. You jumped straight into the main topic & even started to build some tension & suspense with what you chose to say and where you decided to end your sentence. How did your bull get his name? Everything you tell us about him suggests he is a strong & slightly menacing opponent. Has he ever charged anyone or anything or does he just intimidate with his looks?
    Ms Whitaker

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